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Just close your eyes
And dream of me
Slip into sleep
There, you will see

I'm by your side
Though I'm so far away
I'm holding you tight
Until the break of day

Just close your eyes
And drift into sleep
I love you so much
Please, don't you weep

I'm there for you always
Just one dream away
It's simple, but I'll love you there
Until the break of day
©2008-2009 ~ShadowOfTheSun89
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until the break of day...and always

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:iconmalicedomestic:
I'm interested... what was the writing process of this? Was the last line the first that came to you?

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Never again. I needed to turf out the blighter, the beater or biter who'd come like lamb to the slaughter to Salome's bed.
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wow. you're good. yup. it was what inspired the poem...(among other things)...but it's the reason the poem came out the way it did, i suppose. you like it?

-milo

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give a man a mask. then and only then will he tell you who he truly is.
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I am, yes. Thank you. :)

And yes, I do like it. The reason I asked was that I often write the last lines first, and it seemed as if it had been built up the same way.

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Never again. I needed to turf out the blighter, the beater or biter who'd come like lamb to the slaughter to Salome's bed.
:iconinkyster:
wow thats good!

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ONE DAY I WILL TAKE OVER THE WORLD! MWAHAHAHA... Hey is that a cookie?! GIVE ME THE COOKIE!
My art is a blast un!
Envy is better than Edward....in his DREAMS!!!
:iconshadowofthesun89:
thanks very much. i've been writing for as long as i can remember, so i have a little practice. lol.

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give a man a mask. then and only then will he tell you who he truly is.
:iconinkyster:
still....you are amazing!

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ONE DAY I WILL TAKE OVER THE WORLD! MWAHAHAHA... Hey is that a cookie?! GIVE ME THE COOKIE!
My art is a blast un!
Envy is better than Edward....in his DREAMS!!!

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